Here's what I think
You reviewed my "The Holy War" song, so I thought I'd give you my opinion on one of your tunes.
This is a little repetetive, but only because you're sticking with the same instruments. Also, I noticed that by using several spiccato chords (cellos, aren't they?) in a row, it's easy to notice that these are recorded samples, because you keep hearing the same recordings... what I mean is, it sounds slightly unrealistic.
Also, I noticed you used some kind of tremolo string instrument along with the spiccato chords. Personally I don't think it fits in too well.
But, other than these very minor things I noticed, this is a GREAT COMPOSITION, and beats my The Holy War song by far. The brass instruments sound especially amazing. I wanted to ask you a question, though... the drums you used don't sound like Timpani to me. What are they? And if they aren't part of the Edirol Orchestral VSTi, where did you get 'em? Thanks!